Holocaust against Humanity – Phase One

Holocaust against Humanity

FORWARD : I wrote ‘Holocaust against Humanity’ back in 2015. After what I see happening with our recent series of events in United States, it’s alarming how our society is becoming cold and calculating, with both sides, using defensive children as bait. As young as 5 years old, children are pawns intertwined with a political agenda.

It’s becoming an inhuman society, based on greed, entitlement and money.

Once you’ve taken the conscious step to cross over the line, you now have become this evil entity within.

Please enjoy my science-fiction horror ; it just may be closer then you think.

YEAR : 2075

The robotic revolution was upon us.

It was common place to see androids from all walks of life, from space exploration to household protectors.  The world reknown Dr Ford created the first entertainment park called WESTWORLD.

Back in 2015, Steven Hawkins warned us,” Artificial intelligence could spell the end of the human race”.

But no one took Steven’s advice.

At first androids were clumsy, to the point of even being comical. So, the thought of androids controlling mankind was preposterous, to say the least. All the ‘Terminator Trilogy’ movies heed caution, but again, it was just a bunch of science fiction.

Really, what could possibly go wrong?

Celebrations bringing in the New Year 2045 started off very promising, with new heights to space exploration.

Mankind had finally established a Mars colony after three failed attempts. Galileo III ( predecessor of satellite Galileo) explored our cosmic gas giant Jupiter for a third time. Scientists knew from previous missions, Jupiter didn’t have a land mass like earth, but were amazed to find a massive ocean swirling beneath the volatile atmosphere composed of hydrogen, helium and nitrogen.

The next question on everyone’s mind,” Could life really exist on Jupiter after all?”

After the discovery of sea life on Titan, it was logically the next step to assume Jupiters oceans could also be teaming with an alien form of life.

Exploration was going as planned until the fateful day on July 10, 2045, historical became known as ‘Black Friday’ when everything suddenly came to an immediate halt.

Life on Earth changed drastically, after our moon barely recovered from the most disastrous collision of any asteroid before it, appropriately named ‘Black Death’.

Black Death hit the side of the moon on July 10, 2045 at exactly 14:01 hrs PST.

It was only 20 meters round, but it’s composition of solid black ore pulverized our lunar satellite at speeds calculated at over 60 kilometers per second. It literally knocked our moon off its axis, catapulting precariously into an irregular elliptical orbit around earth.

The newly formed moon colonies never had a chance.

Earth’s land mass changed drastically due to the new gravitational pulls on our ocean tides. New lands were formed while existing land formations, such as New York, succumbed to the unexpected tsunami waves. Four million souls lost their lives that dreadful day in New York alone, but they weren’t the only ones effected. Vancouver Island, Baja California, San Diego and half of L.A. disappeared. Worldwide, 600 million people were swallowed up by the sea.

Mankind adapted, but Earth was never the same.

Earth was a colder place, as moon dust surrounded our globe, hiding our precious sun. The race for survival and humanity, quickly produced new technology, from automated unmanned vehicles called ‘Spinners’ to more efficient military androids to control the masses.

Everyone marvelled the massive Spinners swirling about, like beacons of stars, preformed to dissolve the dust crystals within our stratosphere. The filtration system effectively allowed our Sun to shine on earth once again.

But, politics had changed for the worst.

After the disaster, worldwide sects of survivalist tried to rule the earth, each with their own fascist dictatorship. Religious groups banned together, forming from the ‘Christian Knight Saviours’ to the muslin ‘Revelation Crusaders’.

All believed they were the RIGHT PASSAGE TO GOD.

It was true, as said in the verse, 2 Timothy 3:1-17

“But understand this, that in the last days there will come times of difficulty. For people will be lovers of self, lovers of money, proud, arrogant, abusive, disobedient to their parents, ungrateful, unholy, heartless, unappeasable, slanderous, without self-control, brutal, not loving good, treacherous, reckless, swollen with conceit, lovers of pleasure rather than lovers of God, having the appearance of godliness, but denying its power.”

Hundreds of thousands died by the sword of RIGHTEOUSNESS.

Governments with large enough military forces barely survived, while the weak failed miserably. United States banded together with Canada while all of Europe formed their own allegiance. South America and Mexico became known as the ‘Savages Territory’, completely ruled by drug cartels and sect dictators.

United States formed the strongest military opposition ever seen before.

The newly appointed female President, Christine Jefferson was sworn in as the 60th President of the United States on November 20, 2060. President Christine Jefferson introduced a Bill, referred to as the Committee of Automation, whereby congress quickly approved, in order to begin immediately production of the military androids. It was their only recourse to maintain control of the government.

After a bloody war against the fascist religious sects, it was sworn man made religion would never be a part of mankind ever again. Only a spiritual GOD was allowed within the new DARK society.

With complete military rule, it was hard to believe it could possibly get worse, but it did.

On August 7, 2065 President Christine Jefferson appointed in a new list of judges who were NOT human. The new Supreme Court Judges were athletically logical, and completely android with the most suffocated AIA brain, capable of making any judgement in seconds.

They surpassed human judges a thousand times over.

There were Ten Appointed Judges, each with a selected name:

1. Titan – Judge of Warfare

2. Zion – Judge of Apocalypse

3. Damian – Judge of Deceit

4. Zeus – Judge of All Rules and Final Convictions

5. Athena – Judge of Fairness

6. Aphrodite – Judge of the People

7. Cyprus – Judge of All Land

8. Calypso – Judge of Scientific Discovery

9. Atlas – Judge of High Court

10.Prometheus– Judge of Exploration

The first five years, the android judges did a remarkable job, cleaning up the riffraff of society causing serious harm to others. A select marketing team started a campaign across the world, referred to as :

“Androids Now! Securing your countries future. Isn’t it time YOU feel safe?”

The campaign made a bold statement how an android judge would help lock in security, adding a better quality of life. And, as an added bonus, each country who orders in the next 24 hours will receive an army of precision androids, at no extra cost. (*Shipping and taxes NOT included)

Countries scrambled to place in their orders, no matter what the cost! The unruly chaos made it a no brainer.

Soon, without anyone realizing the consequences, carbon copy android judges ruled each and every country across the world. Activists were swiftly silenced where hundreds of thousands mysterious vanished off the face of earth.

Rumours began to spread.

It was said children were taken away from their parents, shipped off to Mars to work in slave camps, mining precious minerals.

To keep the masses calm, an officially statement was released by Aphrodite herself; after all she WAS the, ‘Judge of the People’. Aphrodite was the most pleasing android of them all, fair skinned, brilliant sapphire eyes, athletically formed female body along with long braids of beautiful synthetic gold hair. Her soft voice added a sense of calmness, captivating any unsettled audience.

It was hard NOT to like her, in fact, most adore her.

Aphrodite announced to her people, ” Please do not be alarmed my children. I’m here to protect YOU and your future. Those in question have been detained in a federally inspected compound secured within an undisclosed area on Mars. Don’t worry, their needs are well looked after. It’s in the interest, welfare and safety of my beloved children.”

The crowd swallowed it up, hook, line and sinker.

It was rumoured the room was filled with a calming drug known as Oxycodoise, a derivative gas forming agent from the original Oxycodone. Like heroin, it’s sedative effects created a euphoric state of complete calmness.

With all the restrictions and techniques used to calm the masses, humans were still hard to control. Officials struggled to control a radical underground group known as, ‘The Freedom Fighters‘. THEY whispered the words, “These judges are nothing more than Executioners of the Free World”.

The word, “Executioner” went viral.

Freedom Fighters began spreading the word of fear across the world, stating unruly people were being rounded up and disposed of by means of an electrical gas chamber, as their children were rounded up to become slave labourers.

It was said to be the new Holocaust against Humanity – Phase One.

This holocaust made all other genocides in the past look like a picnic.  By 2070, the Executioners took away the freedom of expression and by 2075, they resolved the governments of the world, bringing in a military ruled government completely controlled by the Ten Judges.

It was named, ‘The United World of Americas’

Mankind was no longer in control of their destiny.  Mankind had become slaves to their own creation.

By Bari Demers screenwriter

I hope you enjoyed my story. Each short story can be adapted into a screenplay.    Contact me here if you found interesting. Follow me here for PHASE TWO.

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Star Wars – The Midi-Chlorians

Star Wars

Watching Star Wars again. Most specifically, Episode II “ Attack of the Clones” . It a wonder that I had previously miss valuable information, since I’ve watched this movie 3X now. Somehow, my mind skipped the part about the “Midi-Chlorians” – Go Figure !

Passing through, I scanned and rescanned the part of the Midi-Chlorians. Apparently, LIFE and the FORCE wouldn’t exist, without the Midi-Chlorians , again – Go Figure !

As said by Qui-Gon Jinn, to Anakin Skywalker

“Without the midi-chlorians, life could not exist, and we would have no knowledge of the Force. They continually speak to us, telling us the will of the Force. When you learn to quiet your mind, you’ll hear them speaking to you.”

THE MIDI-CHLORIANS

Immediately I was intrigued by the science and most particularly, the biology of how they exist within us ( as in Living Hosts). Interesting, Midi-chlorians are these microscopic intelligent life forms that originate from the origin of Life and centre of the Spiritual Cosmic Force.

Throughout billions of years of countless universes and planets forming, to living organisms residing on M- Class Planets, the Midi-Chlorians reside within the cells of all living organisms, as a host.

It’s here where select gifted intelligent beings are allowed to tap into the COSMIC FORCE, using the Midi-Chlorians organisms as a means of communication (aka The Force speaks through the Midi-Chlorians). These gifted beings, of course, are the JEDI. Each Jedi learns how to use the FORCE, creating unimaginable POWERS. Unfortunately, each Jedi can take the path for good or evil (aka the Dark Force).

As well, most trained Jedis can feel the FORCE from other potential beings. Each soul can trace (gauging) their force by a simple BLOOD TEST. Microscopically, a trained JEDI microbiologist can estimate the number of Midi-Chlorians within a host. The higher the count of Midi-Chlorians, the stronger the FORCE within each subject.

It’s been said Anakin Skywalker had a count of over 20,000 Midi-Chlorians, surpassing YODA himself. Unfortunately, Anakin Skywalker took the path of the Darkside, becoming the troubled DARTH VADER.

INTERESTING CONCLUSION:

What I absorbed from all of the above (even though it’s just a storyline) , is the possibility, the FORCE we sometimes hear, could easily be confused as a GOD speaking to us. To add fuel to the fire, just maybe our soul is the essence of the Midi-Chlorians organisms leaving our host bodies, transforming itself back into the SPIRITUAL COSMIC FORCE.

Yoda speaks,” Fear of loss is the path to the darkside. Death is a natural part of life. Rejoice for those around you who transform into the force. Mourn them do not, miss them do not. Attachment leads to jealousy. The shadow of greed, that is.”

As stated, “The energy of the FORCE is the centre, intertwining the SPIRITUAL COSMIC FORCE with the LIVING FORCE.” With this said, you can then argue, over 124,000 Prophets in our history were possibly gifted JEDIS, (including Jesus) tapping into the COSMIC FORCE, we know as GOD. It’s no wonder we can’t ever communicate with the dead. Their transformation is pure energy, within the Cosmic Force of Life and Death.

I know, I know…it all sounds crazy!

BUT – maybe we should quiet our mind and listen closer to what THE FORCE is saying to us.

MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU !

Bari Demers – screenwriter

The Dark Universe

The Dark Universe

THE JOURNEY

Living amongst you is indeed challenging, due to your limited intellect. WE have used so many applications to communicate. However, most of YOU are oblivious to our existence. Even so, a select few have noticed us throughout your busy lives, since the dawn of mankind.

WE have many names, but the five that have stuck throughout your history, are referred to as, the Almighty GOD, the GODS of the HEAVENS, Ancient Alien Ancestors, The Realm of Spirits and BLACK ANGELS. Our species have lived beside you on your daily journey of life, nurturing our creation into becoming a better HUMAN BEING.

Locked in time, the genetic pool of geniuses have emerged from century to century, revealing great minds, such as Michelangelo, Galileo, Leonardo Da Vinci, Albert Einstein and Stephen Hawking. All were part of an exciting journey of inventions, along with opening the mysterious cosmic universes, intertwining time and space, itself.

But with all your short term advancements, human beings aren’t ready to meet us directly, simply because you haven’t earned your journey. Before mankind had a foothold on earth, our species found you as you were, savage primates beginning your evolutionary journey. It was then we decided to cross our genetics with yours, speeding up the evolutionary timeline. In hindsight, our ancestors should have left you alone.

This is where it’s written, “ So God created man in his own image; he created him in the image of God; he created them male and female.”

We apologize for our ancestors for not correcting this. We may have produced a hybrid, (known as HOMO-SAPIENS) believing your species would become wiser. Unfortunately our geneticist couldn’t remove the savage instincts you inherited, in order for your survival on this planet. The savagery of your species is overwhelming fuelled by hate and fear. Sometimes we sent a prophet, in hopes to better your civilization through peace and love ; but each one, you desperately feared. Throughout your existence our ancestors have sent 2500 prophets, thinking one of the prophets would calm your savage instincts.

Unfortunately, all have failed…miserably.

If only human beings could be more passionate, loving towards each other, instead of using hatred and greed. Material things and selfishness isn’t the path to righteousness or forgiveness. Earth and this dimensional universe is nothing more then a testing ground, preparing your soul for its journey into the void of collectiveness, where each soul will join together in complete Nirvana. After millions of ions, our species were taught the existence of true freedom…by just letting go. WE understand the concept is new for your kind, but it’s our hope you’ll see the light before it’s destroyed forever. All living things get one chance of life. It’s up to us see and understand it, before evil grabs you into the realm of darkness, plaguing your soul with complete blackness and despair.

WE say to you…don’t fear what you can’t understand. Don’t take advantage of the sick and weak. Bring your species closer to Nirvana by accepting the good in everyone. But don’t be fooled by the wolf waiting at your door, disguised as sheep. If they ask you for money or material things, they’re indeed the wolf pack waiting to pounce on YOU. To them, your weakness is love and forgiveness. The cruel are too far gone to understand the value of the treasures lying within your soul.

It’s true. Your species still rely on currency in order to receive the basics of survival. To operate in large congregations, it requires an operating cost, in order to feed, cloth and house you. If you can be a nonprofit organization without feeding directors or CEO’s with large sums of cash, then it’s possible to live together comfortably. WE aren’t talking about manmade religions or spiritual schemes, ready to pounce on your graciousness. NO. WE are talking about becoming a self sufficient entity fuelled by love for each other. It’s a cruel unforgiving society your species have created over time, so be vigilant. Follow the laws of the lands in respect for each country, but show unconditional love within your community. Just realize, there’s no GOD whose a person in your fictional heavens. The only GOD is the unity of every living soul since the dawn of infinity, intertwined with time and space, itself. We are all together in this journey of life and death. It’s our only hope you realize the importance of your soul, as well as giving respect to ALL living things, be it on earth or across the universes. In life we all must survive to enrich our biological shells, but our purpose is getting our soul ready for the next journey. We taught the ancient Egyptians well, but still they believed in us as GODS.

Please take heed to our warning…

If you go through life relying on the riches from the backs of the poor and weak, your soul will indeed turn to the blackness of evil, where there’s no return. There’s only one Nirvana, with no room for evil. YOU only have one chance to enrich your soul with goodness fuelled by love, otherwise your soul will evaporate into nothingness, known as the true death of blackness.

Our next warning is just as important…

You can’t rely on having all your eggs in one basket. It’s deemed for catastrophic failure. Throughout billions of years on earth, the ‘Permian Extinction’ is a good example of destroying 90% of life, along with the set back for the prehistoric Homo erectus one million years ago. As a matter of fact there’s been several extinction events throughout the history of life on earth, with one as close as 71,500 years ago. Fortune for your species we started evolutionary cross genetics 101,000 years, keeping 2956 collective specimens safe from harm. As scientists Stephen Hawking has speculated, human beings have…maybe 100 years to populate nearby planets, in order to avoid complete extinction of the human race. After that, earth will begin into its next phase of recreating it’s new evolutionary species. You’re the only species we know, that have a fighting chance to fool the natural order of things.

It’s up to you to make good use of your intelligence, before it’s too late.

Black Angels by Bari Demers

THE DARK UNIVERSE

WE would like to mention…

As said,”Our species live close to you, without you realizing our existence. “ You haven’t evolved, so WE aren’t ready to reveal the secrets of the cosmic universes…just yet.

All we can tell you, WE live within the Dark Universe of endless time.

Your scientists have theorized the possible existence of DARK MATTER along with DARK ENERGY. You won’t believe how close they are to the truth. Some have even speculated a DARK MATTER HALO within your own Milky Way Galaxy. WE are pleased with your theories. You’re so close to opening the pandora box, but will you be ready to grasp its secrets ?

As it stands, WE think not.

WE have observed your existence since our ancestors came to earth, drastically changing your evolutionary timeline. It’s now, our scientists have realized their dreadful mistake. Our meddling in your biological makeup, may have been a catastrophic error. In hindsight, speeding up your genetic timetable and crossing our genetics wasn’t really in your best interest. Our ancestors thought, instead of complete extinction, while earths rotational clock decided to reboot the existence of life from scratch again, we took over changing mankind forever.

NIRVANA FOR TODAY’S TIMELINE

As I write the chronological events of your timeline, WE are still here lurking in the background, edging for the betterment of mankind, teaching and preparing you, so your souls journey may experience NIRVANA.

Soon, we’ll be sending another prophet suited for your timeline. Be ready to accept this ONE as its spiritual aurora will capture your soul, giving YOU a glowing light of unconditional LOVE. Just remember, the wolf is waiting for you too. Look through the eyes of the wolf and see the darkness he or she prevails.

Be ready.

Be ready. Because our next prophet will have powers of unbelievable wisdom, nurturing YOU with love and forgiveness. Money will only be a means of supporting the community, without any profit, whatsoever. Material things will mean absolutely nothing, in the glowing eyes of the prophet. The only goals for the prophet is to enrich your souls for the next journey and give YOU internal PEACE. Your biological bodies will continue to live outs its life as before, but this time, the weight of your soul will be lifted from your old self into a new enlightenment.

REMEMBER

There’s NO god or religion waiting to steal you from everything you worked so hard for. Religion is only manmade, as well, GOD isn’t a person living aimlessly in a heaven with golden gates, surrounded by angels envious of human beings. This is nothing more then a fairytale evolved by manmade religions and our ancestors.

WE apologize for our ancestors mistakes and bid YOU on your journey of PEACE and WELL-BEING.

By Bari Demers – screenwriter

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Welcome to My Imagination

Welcome to my imagination by Bari Demers

It seems in the past weeks I’ve been quiet on WordPress, when in fact I’m busy as ever, writing on a daily basis. Like any other writer, my mind doesn’t stop thinking or imagining new stories.

However, there are times I’ll use other platforms to engage new audiences, like writing about recent world events along with social media interests. I have four science-fiction websites : James Montana Scripts, Genesis, Sci-fi Blog and Futurism. Each one engages SciFi fans, falling deeper into the rabbit hole.

On social media, I use my writing skills on a completely different platform, gearing my love for Las Vegas. It’s an inside look, (using Facebook Pages) showcasing viewers into the mainstream of Las Vegas, with its lifestyle and vacationing opportunities. My site is called Vegas Reviews, ready to share our fun experiences with other Vegas Lovers, writing tips and giving real resort reviews on my website. My experience goes as far back as the 1980’s, with Las Vegas constantly changing on a weekly basis.

It’s a madhouse to keep up, but still can do it.

To complicate things, I’m an artist too, using Instagram as centre stage. Business wise, I keep to LinkedIn and Twitter, just in case a producer wants to get a hold of me, in regards to my screenplays.

Like any other artist, my mind is racing with new ideas ; not enough hours in the day to attend to the whole package.

My style of writing is far stranger then most, with some referring to me as the ‘Vincent Van Gough of writers’, due to my hidden keys of secret messages, lying deep within each storyline. As you read my stories , it’s my hope I’ve lead you onto a quest of finding the secret keys to opening the doors of treasures, like a pirate hunting for gold.

I’m indeed a storyteller, competing within a sea of writers, but hopefully you’ve caught the biggest fish story of them all…my imagination.

So you see, like all artists, we’re all in a barrel of pickles, trying our best to get picked as the juiciest pickle of them all, fighting the rivers current of creative writers, across the globe. It’s a daunting task to even think of making it to the VIP list, like J. K. Rowling or Stephen King. Therefore, I prioritize and concentrate specifically on my dreams and vivid science-fiction imagination, writing up a storm of ideas and fun storylines. IF by chance, my imagination captures your interest, I’m delighted and honoured you’ve taken a few minutes out of your busy day, to read my stories. I truly appreciate it!

With that said, I don’t write to impress the wizards. Instead, I write because it’s what I love to do, pressing your imagination with magical unicorns, zombies, robots and angels from the cosmic universes and the dream world of my imagination.

By Bari Demers – screenwriter

Our Living Hell

PRIDE had cast him above all others.

Darkness slowly absorbed his soul.

Lambs of his Cult are blinded by all the GLORY.

In their EYES, he could do no harm.

As if a KING, he becomes narcissistic, filling his ego with worldly pleasures, ignoring the poor, the sick and vulnerable.

Cloaked as an Angel of Light, the shadow of EVIL spreads across the EARTH.

He is but a MAN, absorbed in his own glory.

Little does he know, he is just one of many.

He is nothing more then a pawn of life, covered in his own waste of greed.

O to the HORRORS of mankind – DARKNESS has filled every corner, every seed of life.

What was right, is now wrong.

What was wrong, is now right.

The living are now the DEAD.

AS I pass through the ‘Valley of Life’, something stirs inside of me.

Something is wrong, but I can’t see it, I can’t taste it, I can’t touch it.

I can’t say what it is, but I know something is seriously wrong.

Is it a DREAM or is it a NIGHTMARE ?

Suddenly, I open my EYES…and there it is, as plain as day.

My heart is filled with tears of sorrow.

OH my dear GOD, I AM awake.

WE are in the VALLEY OF DEATH.

I AM a witness to the HORRORS on Earth.

I AM a witness to the PRIDE of MANKIND.

I AM a witness to the EVIL of DARKNESS.

OH MY DEAR GOD, I AM witness to HELL on EARTH !

By Bari Demers

MEANING OF HELL ON EARTH :

We are born on earth, believing this life of ours is a privilege. We govern ourselves believing we are doing right, but inside we know it’s all wrong. We humans may do as we please, without consequences. We like to think our laws of justice have real consequences, but really, it’s the living who prevail in the end, no matter how evil YOU are.

Our lives are filled with materialistic things which have no meaning. Our thirst for more hunts us to the day we die. We are never satisfied with what we have.

As it was written, it’s been said the meek shall inherit the Earth.

But in reality, the meek are nothing more then the ignorant. Our world is twisted with evil throughout our very existence. We like to believe we are doing right, but we know we are doing more harm, then good. Mankind leaves a trail of blood shed and destruction in its path, destroying everything we touch.

We begin to question all around us, why are things so wrong ?

Why are the weak, the poor, the vulnerable tortured ?

Why do we experience the worse in life, trying to make the best of life?

There is no justice. There is only pain.

It’s then we realize, we are the LIVING DEAD, already tortured throughout our lives until the day we are buried into the ground, into the dust of the forgotten.

WE are the living dead on earth – WE are on earth, living within the HELL of reality.

WE will grow old and die. This is indeed HELL, simply because, after this LIFE, there isn’t any life after death. This is the end of everything we know, soon to be forgotten in time.

WE must have been brought here from the Cosmos of Life in search of ourselves, only to realize there isn’t anything else.

WE are in a twisted fate of anguish – WE ARE ALL the living dead tortured on a hellish earth, spreading our seed of misery across the universe.

GOD has already given JUDGEMENT to us ALL.

Have a wonderful day – Welcome to Hell.

By Bari Demers – screenwriter/ storyteller

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BLACK ANGELS

I HAVE A VISION

I have a vision…

WHERE DID OUR ALIEN ANCESTORS GO?

What happened to them?

I believe I have the answer… my science fiction story BLACK ANGELS expresses the question mankind has asked since the beginning of time.

WHERE DID WE COME FROM – THE SYNOPSIS

In this answer my story follows a drug addicted war hero seeking revenge for his brothers death, willing to risk his crew in a mining expedition on planet AIPHA XL 420 ( known to us as EARTH). It’s essential they find a priceless RED CRYSTAL in order to save their species from a deadly virus.

KING OSIRIS ORDERS

MISSION : By order of King Osiris, his elite team, the ROYAL EMPEROR GUARDS are sent to a newly discovered planet, ALPHA XL 420 (known to us as EARTH) to mine a life saving drug known as the illusive RED CRYSTAL. It’s vital they find it, mine it and ship it back before a deadly virus wipes out their species.

THE EXPEDITION

Led by war hero Commander Cardin, along with eight military specialist and two A.I. androids, their mission is clear. Don’t come home until you find the most valuable crystal in the universe – RED CRYSTAL.

Adding to the dangerous mission, it’s been reported, their long time rivals, the JOTUNNS were recently spotted in the same solar system.

Commander Cardin will stop at nothing to honour his brothers death during the longest war in SIRIANS history – RED STORM.

REVENGE IS AS SWEET AS MILK AND HONEY

Destroying a colony of JOTUNNS would allow his brothers soul to be released on his journey into the afterlife, following the all mighty GOD ATUM.

Unknown to the crew, a creature, only spoke in folklore as BLACK ANGELS, possess planet ALPHA XL 420, spreading its evil darkness upon the earth.

PRIDE HAD CAST HIM DOWN…

O TO SACRED EARTH

A BLACK EVIL HAS SPREAD ACROSS THE LANDS…

O TO THE HORRORS OF EARTH

The fate of the SIRIANS – it’s inevitable.

Priestesses ISIS,THE GODS of SIRIUS, must protect her people at all costs.

Will the crew be able to save their species ?

I have a vision and this vision has already been written into earths history, long before mankind had a foothold on earth.

Let me tell you the story of BLACK ANGELS – our Alien Ancestors.

By Bari Demers – screenwriter

Alien Covenant Review

Warning : SPOILERS ALERT

Finally had the opportunity to watch ALIEN COVENANT this past month and I must say it was a little disappointing. Following Alien franchise since the beginning, the storyline is important to me. My first outburst of the movie was on Twitter :

“Saw @AlienAnthology #VFX astounding but #storyline upsetting. Astronauts have strict protocols. What happened, shouldn’t #AlienCovenant”

Let me explain :

NUMBER ONE

Any one hand-picked for a mission responsible for 2000 colonist, heading for distant planet Origae-6, would (in my mind) be highly trained Astronauts with strict protocols. Their responsibility is the welfare of colonist and not some rogue beacon on an unknown planet. Life-form or not, the DAVID android would make note-of-it, sending a electronic message back to earth through MUTHUR (MUTHUR is the Starship’s on-board main A.I. pronounced M-O-T-H-E-R).

If we were on Star Trek, Mr. Spock would definitely say,” It’s NOT logical. To make critical errors in judgment, threatening 2000 colonist is indeed unlikely.”

BUT – it’s a movie, meant to add precarious irrational decisions, causing complete havoc with no return. That’s what makes a movie exciting.

Screenwriters are trained to follow a specific Screenplay Outline, as are Directors. But Directors have the freedom to change whatever they want, as long as it makes a substantial profit at the box office. Here’s a quick layout :

1. ACT ONE – Establishment | Setup | Inciting Incident | Contemplation | Turning Point

2. ACT TWO – Acceleration | Enter Obstacles | Dead Centre | Crossing the Rubicon | Raising the Stakes | Crisis

3. ACT THREE – Prepare for Confrontation | Climatic Conflict | Aftermath and Resolution | Dissolution and Farewell

See HERE for in-depth detail.

The point is, there must be some kind of conflict and a series of mistakes to add tension to the movie, or else it would be pretty boring. For example, the real events and mishaps of Apollo 13 turned into a good movie, because the astronauts and NASA had to solve real problems in a dangerous environment. The iconic words, spoke the urgency…

“Houston, we’ve had a problem…”

It was indeed a life or death defining situation, where the whole world followed in their survival and safety back to earth from the moon.

That said, it’s vital the storyline makes sense or it becomes a jumbling mismatch puzzle with incoherent timelines, making us viewers grasp for reality. Knowing all to well Ridley Scott is a master Director, it seems ludicrous he wouldn’t tell a good storyline. After a little research, it wasn’t long before I realized the editing process of cutting scenes from Alien Covenant, proved to be the culprit. Ridley Scott’s creativity was hacked by removing crucial scenes by the editors involved. As a director I would be biting my upper lip, as scenes were eliminated.

Curiously, Ridley Scott still has full control of his movie.

So why did he approve of the Covenant crew making so many mistakes? Is it just a Hollywood ploy, to make fans see AWAKENING in order to get all the answers?

To me, this is how I would change the scene to make it work :

It would make more sense if android DAVID caused the INCIDENT, where he sent a deadly beam of energy disrupting the starships point-of-origin. It would be better then a random wave of CME ( Corona Mass Eruption) from a nearby star, as it happens in the movie. The scenes from that point would still hold true ; waking up the crew and killing their captain, due to a malfunction of his pod. In my mind, the burst of energy could have crippled the Starship to no return, causing it to crash on the planet where David is patiently waiting to carry out his deranged assault on the crew still alive. Crash landing on this planet would have made for a gripping terrifying scene.

NUMBER TWO

I love the fact Alien Covenant continues 10 years after my beloved movie Prometheus, so well executed by Ridley Scott. Personally watch Prometheus a dozen times to pick up eastereggs* I may have missed.

ON THAT NOTE :

To me I really don’t understand the backlash of Prometheus from fans. I realize the original ALIEN was basically a B-movie horror-slasher, but with its strong storyline and well executed ( pun intended ) actors, Alien did well at the box office. It was like this secret little gem waiting to be opened. That said, it’s my belief the fans of Alien, Aliens and so on, expect a horror slasher unconcerned about the science-fiction, the actual science and the clever plots Ridley Scott placed into Prometheus. It’s clear Ridley Scott caved to the wishes of its ALIEN fans, giving them the blood thirsty slasher ALIEN COVENANT.

[SPOILER ALERT FOR PROMETHEUS]

NUMBER THREE

If you followed Prometheus, you would be familiar with our lovely character Elizabeth Shaw, the last human surviver, along with David. We know Elizabeth doesn’t trust David, but she needs him to fly the Engineers Starship in order to answering the burning question she asked the Juggernaut,” Why did YOU (The Engineers) change your mind? What did we do wrong? Why do you want us dead?”

If I were Elizabeth, my trust in David would be nil. After fixing David and his ability to set course for Engineer’s HOMEWORLD using one of many alien Derelict spacecraft 🚀, I would immediately place David in stasis before doing the same myself. Any kind of tampering of my hyperbaric sleep chamber, would immediately set off an emergency alarm with instant release from stasis. So, in effect, Elizabeth would still be alive when Alien Covenant crew arrives, meaning a whole chain of events could take place.

I love the FINAL LOG of Dr. Shaw :

Elizabeth’s Final LOG, last survivor of Prometheus :

“The ship and her entire crew are gone. If you’re receiving this transmission, make no attempt to come to its point of origin. There is only death here now, and I’m leaving it behind. It is New Year’s Day, the year of our Lord, 2094. My name is Elizabeth Shaw, the last survivor of the Prometheus. And I am still searching.”

JAMES MONTANA’S FINAL LOG :

In conclusion, overall Alien Covenant seems to have gain support by the majority of fans, and in the end, that’s what really counts. 21st Century Fox covered the production budget cost of $97 million (reasonable, considering other scifi movies) making $238 million in sales.

Not bad, not bad at all.

I’m sure Ridley Scott was relieved he hit the mark for fans and certainly Fox must be pleased too. As a long time fan of the Alien Trilogy, can’t wait to see the release of Alien: Covenant sequel AWAKENING, apparently starts production in 14 months. If I had a choice of Directors for my Scifi BLACK ANGELS, Ridley Scott would be on the list. However, there’s a growing list of great Directors suited for my proposed film/pitch.

Bari Demersscreenwriter Read more of my stories and articlesEASTEREGGS*- Here are some neat (yup I used the word neat…sorry) little eastereggs you’ll find throughout the ALIEN TRILOGY.